A basic post here Alex with many capital letter errors eg time inc and bauer/ uk and spelling error on final slide "eel" - i think you need to add more screen grabs and be more evaluative.You need more screen captures and you haven't considered any of these institutions use of digital distribution or social media. Target Level 3 by responding to this comment.
A basic post here Alex with many capital letter errors eg time inc and bauer/ uk and spelling error on final slide "eel" - i think you need to add more screen grabs and be more evaluative.You need more screen captures and you haven't considered any of these institutions use of digital distribution or social media. Target Level 3 by responding to this comment.
ReplyDeleteMuch better Alex and moving into proficient though slide 5 is still poorly worded. Bauer are an institution not a brand.
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